Comments : Mishapen hands

  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a very heartfelt poem Chelsea. You have a heart of gold to write about this. The imagery is great too. Sad though. But it's very honest. When people have no one to care for them then all the words you say is true. I think when you have nothing you have no choice but to enjoy the company of others and thr simple things you get. When you have nothing you have to get what you can which is more difficult then it seems. I love how her eyes lit up though she was nervous to see you or take the coin from you. Again this is s very lovely write as you helped s person and that takes more courage then people know. Doing the right thing makes your heart gold. Great write. Xx :)