Comments : Graduation 2006.

  • 17 years ago

    by swill

    Yay lidalids did it! lol...that was a beautiful poem...captured the entire bittersweetness of the occasion... one suggestion though:

    But our teachers have faith
    That we'll be just fine

    i think you should remove the "but" in that line...cos the line before that also has a but...so but and but make two butts...lol...not what we need :P

    all in all, i love your poem :D...i went through grad sometime back and it was so sad to leave all those friends behind...but now we're done ...and we must get on with our lives... sorry for the extra-long comment...lmao...ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by Sophie

    Well done.

    great write!

    sophie:) xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Sophie

    Well done.

    great write!

    sophie:) xo