Valentine's Day (hay(na)ku)

by Sylvia   Feb 13, 2009


Cards,
Roses, chocolates.
Romantic candlelit dinner.

Happy Valentine's Day.
Hugs and kisses.
Love.

Copyright © 2009 Sylvia All Rights Reserved
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The Hay(na)ku Verse Form, a 21st century poetry form. Invented by poet Eileen Tabios, who is also publisher, Meritage Press. Officially inaugurated on the Web on June 12th, 2003 (Philippine Independence Day). The form spread through the Web to poets all over the world. Eileen Tabios initially called the form "the Pinoy Haiku". Vince Gotera proposed the name "hay(na)ku", and this name has stuck. This corresponds to a Tagalog phrase that means roughly "Oh!" or (in Spanish) "Madre ". The last syllable is pronounced "ko" so maybe the final name will be even more independent of "hayku": "hay(na)ko".

In a traditional Hay(na)ku, there are: A tercet: 3 lines. A total of 6 words: 1 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 3 in the third line. There is no restriction on syllables or stressed or rhymes.

Variations:

In the 'reverse' haynaku, the longest line is placed first and the shortest last. The total is still 6 words: 3 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 1 in the third line. Multiple hay(na)ku can be chained to form a longer poem. There are other variations also.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    With such few words you really sad what Valentines day was. Nothing to really saw about this one.. you used a interesting form to describe a beautiful holiday.

    :]

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Valenetines day is a beautiful holiday if you have someone to share it with. Your words here were very sweet and reflected a perfect Valentines day indeed.
    With so few words you managed to say all that was needed.
    Awesome work.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww with so little words you have captured the essence of Valentines Day. You make Valentine's day sweet as it could be.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Silvia,

    This is a real feel good poem!
    I loved it, it would be something that is printed on a real card!

    *hugs dear lady*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Sylvia,

    oh how I would love to receive such a card with these words.

    Well done

    I hope Valentine's day is a happy one for you.

    Michael