by Tara Kay
Submission date : 2011-12-12
Everlasting ( F C D )
Yeah, I love christmas.
The yummy food, the atmostphere, the chilly weather, everything. Good piece.
Lebanese Phoenix ( F C D )
LOL Tara.... bahahhahahahhahahahahhahaha
You left me in joyful tears at the end, and oh my god, it's the first time, I think I read a rhyming poem from you?? Anyway, it's how do they say it? OFF-THE-CHAIN :)
Here's the spirit of you that I know!! The spirit of holidays. Today when I was coming back home, I saw all the ads on the streets because of Holiday sales, foods... and other Christmas stuff. We do not celebrate Christmas, us Moslims, but when i was in an Evangelical school, I used to be in the Christmas chorus, and GOD, it was heaps of fun........ XD XD
It was like a typical scenery, I see in Christmas movies of the family gathering around the table with the decoartions and a big spirit. Girl, you really knew how to give your words the groove needed to entice the readers. It was like a song, I swear it can be a song!!!! I laughed vociferously on being stuffed with food. I hope you enjoy your time Tara.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
This is going into my favorites!!!:)
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
Wonderful imagery with a great rhyme scheme The personal touches made it seem so real