Shooting stars (haiku)

by Michael D Nalley   Feb 17, 2013


A meteor falls
as an asteroid passes
a coincidence

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  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is really neat, I enjoyed this myself and felt I was watching this happen one night... wondering if there was a reason or if the asteroid and meteor were somehow connected. Just thinking of a shooting star makes me want to make a good wish! Very simple but thoughtful haiku nonetheless.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I love this one, it's fun to read plus has a good imagery and according to how I interpret it, it's like the meteorite fell for the asteroid, and the shooting stars is what the meteorite is seeing.

    Probably, wrong interpretation but I like reading this

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like this, especially for the fact it can be taken in many ways. Its simple but nice. Great job

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