Title Contest

  • Jenni Marie
    14 years ago

    Love Me Like You Used To
    Reserved-xLeftxBehindx

    Don't Believe My Heart Can Stand Another You

    It's A Little To Late

    Why Do I Love You?
    Reserved-Hallo A Lilium

    I'm Not Missing You

    Walk Away

    Nobody Knows It But Me
    Reserved-Hallo A Lilium

    ~RULES~
    Reserve.
    Two people per title, two titles per poet
    Rhyme is optional
    If using formed poetry explain the form

    Deadline and prizes to be decided

  • xLeftxBehindx
    14 years ago

    Actually I really want to change that if I could! I would like "Walk Away" instead!
    Thanks!

  • Hallo A Lilium
    14 years ago

    I'll take Why Do I Love You & Nobody Knows It But Me. Please & Thank you

  • Jad
    14 years ago

    I will take "Walk Away"

  • xLeftxBehindx
    14 years ago

    Walk Away

    We laugh, we talk, and we play
    And all I think about is you at the end of the day
    We hang out and spend time together
    You even gave me your coat in the bad weather

    I know you have a girlfriend and you like her a lot
    A Valentine's necklace for her I helped you spot
    I always listen to things I never wanted to hear that you love about her
    I help you with the problems but me with you is what I prefer

    You are so caring with your kind hearted smile
    She is sweet and all but can't you just stay here awhile?
    And when you find someone that is your perfect portray
    I will force myself to smile, congratulate, and just walk away

    You need me and I come running expecting the worst
    I get there and ask what's wrong but you kiss me first
    Passionate and meaningful but I don't understand
    We looked at each other and recognized the unplanned

    Talked for awhile and everything was clear
    Everything was out in the open, nothing else to hear
    Broke up with the girl but still didn't want me
    I understand and am alright although I disagree

    We still stayed friends even after that night
    He still makes me move forward, he's my light
    And when he finds someone that is his perfect portray
    I will force myself to smile, congratulate, and just walk away

  • Inside the Liar
    14 years ago

    I'll take "Love Me Like You Used To."

  • Wings Of Flames
    14 years ago

    Walk Away

    The promise in your heart,
    This ache from within.
    I hope you keep your lips intwined.
    With your deathly hollow cage.

    This madness drives me,
    To the brink of murder.
    I want to see your face crushed,
    Beneath my concave boot.

    The tears peel down my face.
    Hollow, concave, void.
    You know nothing of the petals lost,
    In this unforgiving fog.

    The broken ashes whisper:

    'Alone with their heart,
    Broken in two,
    Alone with their heart,
    Alone with you.'

    Why can't you pity me?
    Let me lie down in the cold.
    I long to weep an eternal sorrow,
    For the lost friend and new found foe.

    You have let my heart sink,
    The depths of hell burn thick.
    But your words sting more then any naked flame,
    And harder then any crystal.

    Colder then any shard of ice.
    Splinters catch my skin.
    I'm hung.
    And you.

    Well You've finally won.

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    Is this still open?

  • Jenni Marie
    14 years ago

    Yes, it's still open! I haven't had chance to come online much recently, but hopefully I can find some time now :) I'll close this in about..say a week or so.

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    Nevermind...no time >.<

  • xLeftxBehindx
    14 years ago

    When does this close?

  • Second to None
    14 years ago

    Don't Believe My Heart Can Stand Another You

    Torn to bits by my love for you
    I loved you to death, this is true
    I don't think my heart could break
    Beacuse you left nothing to take

    Your memory so vibrant and stong
    Is me wanting you oh so wrong?
    I wish you were here by my side
    But I said I didn't need you, I lied

    I want you back more than anything
    My desire for you is a sure thing
    Now made of paper and string
    Thanks to the conversational sting

    My heart is now weak at the seams
    Held up by all these weak beams
    My confidince is starting to fall and lean
    I wish you could see what you to me means

  • oldthings
    14 years ago

    "I'm Not Missing You"

    I only think of you when I'm drifting into dreams
    You only cross my mind like a river bed and a stream
    I only remember you at intervals of every hour or two.
    But no, oh no, oh no, oh no... No I'm not missing you.

    I don't miss you when I'm out with my friends.
    No I surely don't miss your cute little hands.
    I don't miss the way you felt in my arms.
    Don't miss your smile, your wit, or your charm.

    I don't lay awake as you dance through my head,
    Never have I relived any of the sweet things you said.
    Surely I don't see your face in strangers on the street,
    Never have I ever hoped that we might accidentally meet.

    Concluding what I'm trying to say, trying to make clear,
    I obviously do not think of you now that your not here.
    Moved on with my life I swear it's true, yeah I've found someone new,
    So no, oh no, oh no, oh no... No I'm not missing you.