My first poem

  • Clara Sloan
    11 years ago

    Hello! I just wrote my first poem today, and i dont know if i feel like its good bc of the connection i have to the words. or if it is really alright. I would love if someone could check it out and give me some feed back, its on my page.

  • Autuumnbree
    11 years ago

    Sure

  • Suzanne Jimenez
    11 years ago

    I looked at ur poem its really good. :)

  • Abhijit Nayak
    11 years ago

    Well its fantastic...
    Just give u one suggestion dont be limited do it un limited...
    By putting it in various sites..
    recently came on a site called touchtalent.com just put it there or have a look there its awesome. Its my experience.
    Thank u
    Regards..
    Abi..

  • Abhijit Nayak
    11 years ago

    Its awesome..fantastic work..
    Just giving u a suggestion.Dont be limited just put it in various sites. Recently came to a site touchtalent.com. Just sharing u my experience just have a look on it.
    Thank u..
    Regards..
    Abi