My first poem here!!!

  • Jill
    11 years ago

    Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1218064

    I hope you like it.

  • Lemon
    10 years ago

    Nice, I especially liked the end :). Keep writing, amigo :)

  • Tim
    10 years ago

    That's great dude! :) - Very good rhyming style, and I like how well organized your lines are. It gives the piece a good appearance, and make it easier to read.

    Keep Penning

    Tim