Need some advice!! Will give back!

Hi everyone, I would really like for a few people to read and comment on these two poems. Let me know what you thought while reading it. I realize there are a couple spelling errors on there, but I am headed there to fix them now. Thank You!

I will also comment on 2 of your poems and give you feedback!

*Flip to Good From Bad*
*I Know How it Feels*

Just read and commented on both. Can you check out a couple of my newer pieces.

Thank you

I read them and commented on a couple! Hope I made a good impression! Good writing and keep up the good work!

*~BrittBratt~*

I will comment on yours now. will you comment on both of my newest ones please?