replied to hiraeth
2 months ago, updated 2 months ago
Hey, Mark. I just found out about this thread... nice!
Trying to explore more subjects in my writing, I wrote a piece that can be properly classified as erotic. It was very descriptive and generally narrative which I did scrap because I have this belief that saying too much in writing an erotic piece somehow disrupts the sensuality. So, I wrote another poem trying to be as innocent as possible... feedback on this one is really important to me. :-)