my poem's name!

  • Nee
    19 years ago

    hey all..i need some help from you...
    ive written this poem and i dunno wut tittle should i chose..so plz read it and give me some opinions
    thx alot
    xxxx

    why?!..
    why's everything going wrong?!..
    what's happening to me?
    I feel lost..
    not from now..
    from the moment I met you..
    you've changed my life..
    you've put something sweet in my heart..
    It's your love..your honest and your smile..
    and i believed our love will stay forever..
    but not until now..not anymore
    let me say the Truth..
    yeah..i loved you..
    i know you did too but not as much as i did..
    every moment in everyday and every night I was loving you more
    did you realize?
    No..I don't think so..
    maybe you told me onetime "I love you"
    maybe you kissed me onetime..
    But might you come back to my life again?!
    believe me...
    I'm not erasing your love from my heart even though your love for me has died
    I'll grow up with this love..
    and I'll wait for you forever

  • StarGirl
    19 years ago

    what about the idea of "As long I love you.."

  • don mohr
    19 years ago

    how about--hmmm.."waiting for the days"

  • Emilia
    19 years ago

    I would use "Why"

  • Nee
    19 years ago

    thxxxxxxxxx all i think i'll chose waiting for the dayz...but i liked them all
    thxxxxxxxxxx alooooot
    nina :D xxxx