Cowriting

I think thats an awesome idea, I read a duet poem just was excellent

I also want to participate

Through dark red eyes
I stare at you
Why'd you go
I have no clue
The love i felt
i thought was real
But the pain that dwells
Is all i feel

How was that Shadowmaker?
Aken Sol

So i take it we're not finishig this duet, Shadowmaker? Just wondering...
Aken Sol

Through all the tears
Of heart and soul.
Empty is my chest,
My heart is a hole.
And as i search
Indignantly
For where my love is
'Tis a mystery.

Now that i finally have someone writing this with me... how bout we make it even longer ;-)
Aken Sol

Okay.... anyone? at all....
Lol
This is sooo ironic.

Aken Sol

Empty sockets,
Damp and deep.
Wet from the tears,
Cold from the sleet.
Frozen in time
Still and serene.
Somebody's lover,
Torn from a dream.

Through dark red eyes,
I stare at you.
Why'd you go,
I have no clue.
The love I felt,
I thought was real.
But the pain that dwells,
Is all i feel.

Through all the pain
That resides in me,
This life I live is like a game.
All I want is to be free.
All my love, that resides in me
Is boxed up, ready to give
To anyone who wants love can see.
I will give it to anyone in this life I live.

Through all the tears
Of heart and soul.
Empty is my chest,
My heart is a hole.
And as I search
Indignantly,
For where my love is…
'Tis a mystery.

Well there's our poem... im going to post it up now... maybe under Tear Stains.

Aken Sol