Sad poem.

  • Miu
    16 years ago

    I would like to read a poem that would make me cry. Could anyone help me with that? :)

    Thank you!

  • Tara Kay
    16 years ago

    I am not sure whether these are any good.
    But 3 of my poems mean alot to me and always seem to make my best friend cry so maybe they will make you cry too.

    -In the arms of the great lord
    -A troubled Soul with nowhere to hide
    -Eyes of the angel

    Take a look
    Hope i was of help
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • Wallace
    16 years ago

    Sure, read these.

    -The Little Boy
    -I'm Sorry Mom

  • Nuh
    16 years ago

    Humm i dont think it will make you cry but i have one i think its under> "Dont know what to call it!!"

  • Ciandestine
    16 years ago

    I have one, you kinda have to think about it check me out.

  • Jessica
    16 years ago

    I have a feww, take a look. xx

  • Miu
    16 years ago

    Aww ty everybody! :)

  • Sarah
    16 years ago

    U can read one of my poems..they r all sad...I guess..but checked them out sweety..

  • enigmatic_prey
    16 years ago

    I don't know if this poem can make you cry but just try......i was crying when i made this...while trying to make something an acrostic........

    my tears

    (",)

  • Spirit
    16 years ago

    Yea here

    -The Last Day-
    -STOP IT-

    if i think of any more i'llet you know

  • XsuicideXsexXscandalX
    16 years ago

    Little Girl and Your Tears it makes me cry every time

  • Veamm
    16 years ago

    I have sad poems but i know if my piece suits to you!

  • Tyrone
    16 years ago

    I need help on looking for this poem?

  • littlemissxsunshine
    16 years ago

    Heres one not on the site but i like it
    i made it but i took the first adn last paragraph from another poem so no i did not steal it

    In my pure black dress I dropped a single tear
    His voice is the only thing I want to hear
    The coffin slowly descends into the ground
    Now I have a story, waiting to be found

    It all started one day, before I went to bed
    We said our goodnights I accidentally said goodbye instead
    I started to walk to my room, not knowing what else to say
    I guess his cancer speed up, causing Him to go astray

    Waking up the next morning, him in his bed
    My sister said "go say bye to daddy " I knew he was dead.
    as I ran to the door I saw alot of cars.
    i knew what had happened but it just went to far

    holding back the tears as I walk into the room
    i go hug my daddy not wanting to let go
    he was very cold i wanted to cry
    i never suspected my daddy would die

    i didn't cry one bit till a week or two later
    i knew my daddy didn't want me to
    i wanted him to be proud
    i hope my crying didn't let him down

    i think of you daddy up to this day
    thinking you would have never gone astray
    daddy i love you and want you to know
    save me a spot in heaven cause i intend to go

    "he died four in the morning, earlier than dawn.
    Exactly four years ago.. my daddy was gone.."
    We were both inseparable, until his dying day
    I wanted to say goodbye, but that; Is hard to say

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    I'm not sure whether or not any of mine would make you cry, but most of mine are sad. Some if the better ones are:
    "One Last Chance"
    "She Tried"
    and
    "I can Hurt you too"
    let me know what you think.

  • Melvin LeVeque
    16 years ago

    Yea click on my profile and read sad poem 1 and 2...they are pretty good i think...hope you enjoy

  • Somber Esprit
    16 years ago

    ~borrowed time~ and
    ~where's justice~
    might do it for you.

  • xxSuicidalxx
    16 years ago

    All my poems are sad...basically thats the only kind i write...you can take a peek at them if you want

  • SeCrEt WiSh
    16 years ago

    "Silent Plea" Might make you cry...idk most of my poems are pretty sad, then again thats also how I write so...yeah...lol you can take a look if you want.

  • babyPB
    16 years ago

    Well, I have some my poems,
    everytime I think about it,
    it makes [ME] cry, cause they bring back the memories,
    here are the names:
    - suicide
    - lies
    - i lost you

  • Gizmo
    16 years ago

    I have a couple there in my feuture list

  • That One Girl
    16 years ago

    Jeez trust me my poems will make you cry... they made me cry

  • Indian Comma Bean
    16 years ago

    Some of my poems have put a tear in some of my friends eyes, check em out

  • azii
    16 years ago

    They were great! good job

  • sarenightmarexx
    16 years ago

    I dont think that they would make u cry...but mostly all my poems are sad...they mean a LOT 2 me.

    x

  • TinyDancer46
    16 years ago

    I have some sad ones. I'm not sure if they'd make you cry... it depends on what affects you!

  • hadia
    16 years ago

    I dont really want you to cry, but I know what you mean.. at times you have to cry, but yeah..i have some if you wanna look.

  • TwistedAngel xx
    15 years ago

    I have some sad poems
    just check my profile and look at my featured ones
    cheers
    xx

  • Ixora
    15 years ago

    Hm i think its diff. for everyone i mean everyone feels differently you know.

    my best advice is to see whats your scar & stab at it

    the three poems very dear to me that are the only ones that made me cry are

    -this one by Dr. Earl Reum i dont think it actually had a title but it was in one of the greatest books every written: The Perks of Being a Wallflower

    -Close the door by Latoya Lane
    (it's about drunk driving)

    -and probably my favorite of all:

    "My Name is Misty" by Misty Ramsey--always gets me T_T

    ...hope it helps

  • Unamed
    15 years ago

    Umm i'm not sure if any of these will make u cry..but here

    "I'll allways be your little girl daddy."
    "To my dad"
    "I've allways been the good girl"

    those would probably make u cry.maybe....
    but these are also sad..but i don't think the will make u cry

    "My wound"
    "I just can't seem to find you"

    give them a try!
    ***aLy***

  • Goth marionette
    15 years ago

    I got a sad poem called " why did u make me love u?"...I am not sure if it will make u cry...but it got a sad ending

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    You can read "For One Of My Friends", its about my friend facing death in her life, her grandpa's death. Hope you like it!

  • Bre Monique
    15 years ago

    I can try =)

    Try my poems "One Night Stand" and "A Beautiful Day." The former used to make me cry whenever I read it <probably because I'd remember exactly who it was for and how it made me feel> and the latter is just a sad twist on reality.

  • John
    15 years ago

    I got a few 2 but dont know if there sad.

  • HumanAngel
    15 years ago

    I have a few but I don't know if they'll make you cry.

  • Mask of Pain
    15 years ago

    Hey read my poem (May Make you cry). Its very sad.

  • AlmostLover
    15 years ago

    Here is one of my poem i would not say it will make you cry or anything but i might make you think about many diffenent things.

    ALONE

    My birthday wish was a dream

    A dream about you and I

    I wished apon the candle light

    I wished this dream would go alright

    The candle light was gone

    I gently closed my eyes

    I wanted you to see me for who i truley was

    Not what was on the outside

    But what was in my heart

    These feelings for you were not a joke

    I hid behind my skin

    Sorry if i start to cry

    But your the only guy

    I really loved

    In the end i lied the roses next to the stone

    Just knowing id be alone.

  • Lost and Delirious
    15 years ago

    Try reading some of mine, there pretty sad.

  • Michelle18
    15 years ago

    Uhmmmm.. well u could read one of mine...

    *he was sent up in the sky

    enjoy