About breaking up with someone (saying sorry )

  • bluecrush
    16 years ago

    Any one know any good ones to read please

  • Men
    16 years ago

    Have a look at my poems, either loveless, or questions of love

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    16 years ago

    Try this one:

    It used to feel so special
    When you tightly grasped my hand,
    But now it's superficial
    And I just dont understand.

    I used to feel like treasure
    When you gave me special names,
    But now its lost its pleasure
    And this state feels quite insane.

    It used to feel so faultless
    When embraces we exchanged,
    But youve become so thoughtless
    And now it just feels strange.

    I used to feel so smitten
    When we simply kissed goodbye,
    But I now dont feel so "taken"
    And I cant decipher why.

    It used to feel so heated
    When you wrapped me in your arms,
    But that feeling has depleted
    And its setting off alarms.

    I used to feel so love-struck
    When our fingers intertwined,
    But youve left me looking dumb-struck
    And its just so... never mind.

    We used to feel like lovers
    When I wanted nothing more,
    But Im crying on my covers
    And Im just not so sure.

    I used to feel so happy
    When you gave me butterflies,
    But all this seems so crappy
    And I must apologize.

    Babe, this cant continue,
    It just cannot go on,
    I dont know whats with you,
    so fix it for the next one.

    I'm gone.

  • Dino Dhamphyr
    16 years ago

    I have two "Untitled" and "Forgive Me"

    =)