A gloomy poem

  • Abu3li
    16 years ago

    Hi

    I'm looking for a completely gloomy poem that makes the heart melts with sadness.

  • Bre Monique
    16 years ago

    You could try my poem 'A Beautiful Day'

  • Alex D
    16 years ago

    Talks of Self-Inflicted Cessation:
    I scream as I feel the warm tears run down my face
    As the memories flow and wont leave me to die in this place
    My hands are shaking, Body's quivering, Eyes streaming
    As I seal my eyes to make it go away, or at least hoping.

    Pour another drink in hopes of drowning my sorrow
    Instead I pass out, so another day I will borrow
    Because honestly my life has to be on lease
    Because honestly, these feelings wont cease

    My hearts here for me, My hearts here for you
    Its everything I need, Its something youve torn in two
    So in this I receive pain, In this you receive new life
    So Alone forever I will break, Cozy you two, together, will thrive

    Forever broken, Hearts unhealing, I will have to end this soon
    Perhaps Ill fly away in a big balloon or spend my days in saloons
    Or perhaps Ill man up, and just take the easy way out
    Itll stay unspoken, though you know what Im talking about

    Demise of My Sinuside:
    Under the setting sun is where I admitted my wishes of death
    And why I cry without reason other than to calm my unrest
    And I think of the girls that I once knew, found them high on ecstasy
    Which led me to believe theyre all much happier then me,
    I think.

    A Heart is broken without losing love
    A Soul goes finally spoken and plans a trip above
    A Fight has been lost and life will soon end
    Hopefully, my after life will soon begin
    Suicidal

    I contemplated ending it all and shooting myself in the head
    But I went to town and drowned myself in liquor instead
    Where I believe I went home and passed out in bed
    Though the details are not quite as clear as needles and thread
    Memories hazy

    A coward walks past the path that leads out
    Filling his emptiness in alcohol is what hes about
    A coward he is and a coward he shall remain
    Until he can rid himself of this lonely pain
    Courageless

    What could possibly extricate me from this place?
    Deciding upon the best approach to put me in my place
    How sharp does the knife need be to cut my ties to this place?
    I wonder where my will to live has been displaced..
    Distorted Reality

    A sadness takes over and he slowly breaks down
    His life seems worthless and his cries resound
    His courage kicks in and he formulates his plan
    His life slowly slips from his bleeding hands
    Deceased

    When a heart breaks, its never really broken
    But that doesnt prove true in my suicide
    Look at me, Im dead and I was only eighteen
    The details are obscured but its obvious what I came to decide
    A Tragedy

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    Most of mine are sad but I don't know if they're good enough to make your heart melt. Check out my poem 'One Last Chance' if you want for a pretty sad love story.