Wow..this is really well done.. i like the style, the emotion all of it...
nice work
xoxo

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I've only recently read your work, but i can honestly say it amazes me.
every line is perfection and the pragmatics are so clever and subtle.
you have a rare ability to completely manipulate words and integrate them into real seeming situations in your poems.
you are an inspirational writer.

(god, i sound like a groupie.)

I really enjoyed that read - it was saturated with emotion and was REAL feelings rather than a drummed up expression or cliches... I liked your ocassional rhyming but without a syllable count or structure making it seem too formal and tight.

Good piece. Look forward to reading your others. Welcome to the club.

1st rule - Dont talk about The Club.
2nd rule - Dont talk about The Club.
3rd rule - read all of Mo's poems and tell her she's the best... hehee - kidding! :)

I really really really really enjoyed this it was really really good...you have so much passion and so much devotion to writing..i think you will go far if you keep it up!((5))

(i love this poem so much that i often read it when i'm stressed)
i just noticed, however, that you wrote "abOnormal" i'm guessing you meant "abnormal?" Unless abonormal is a word, which it could be for all i know.
anyway, just thought i'd let you know

Great style
5/5