I've only recently read your work, but i can honestly say it amazes me.
every line is perfection and the pragmatics are so clever and subtle.
you have a rare ability to completely manipulate words and integrate them into real seeming situations in your poems.
you are an inspirational writer.
I really enjoyed that read - it was saturated with emotion and was REAL feelings rather than a drummed up expression or cliches... I liked your ocassional rhyming but without a syllable count or structure making it seem too formal and tight.
Good piece. Look forward to reading your others. Welcome to the club.
1st rule - Dont talk about The Club.
2nd rule - Dont talk about The Club.
3rd rule - read all of Mo's poems and tell her she's the best... hehee - kidding! :)
(i love this poem so much that i often read it when i'm stressed)
i just noticed, however, that you wrote "abOnormal" i'm guessing you meant "abnormal?" Unless abonormal is a word, which it could be for all i know.
anyway, just thought i'd let you know