Comments : She Paints Me Blue.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Dont tell me it's not worth the effort again
    because no ending is good without a fight.
    =love it!

    well done on this xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by ether

    Some people aren't worth our time.

  • 12 years ago

    by limp

    X

  • 12 years ago

    by limp

    X

  • 12 years ago

    by she

    Dont tell me it's not worth the effort again
    because no ending is good without a fight.
    --fav. part
    love the ending
    the whole poem was amazing

  • 12 years ago

    by girly

    This is nothing far from amazing.
    she paints me blue is a title ofa song by something coporate, idk if youve ever heard of them/ you should listen to them. their lyrics sound like your poetry

  • 12 years ago

    by Pamela

    Wow I don't know what to say.
    This poem is sad and it made me feel sad just reading it, I mean I once again loved the phrases like:
    -"strawberry taste of your wine cool lips"; and
    -"because you and i are candles burning to be
    lit."-I really liked this part!!!!!;
    -"i dont ever want anything but a strawberry
    kiss."-this part ended the poem very well, I
    think it made me enjoy the poem more!
    Pamela

  • 12 years ago

    by Phantasma

    I love this poem, its one of your best and at the moment my favorite poem in all of everywhere <333. The flow was amazing and i really enjoyed reading it well done.5/5. i look forward to read more of you work in the future.

  • 12 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    This is a simply beautiful and tragic write. The atmosphere you created with your word usage was strong and wonderful; each and every word seemed perfectly ensconced within the lines and emotions. The flow was nice and seemingly effortless.

    The first two lines really intrigued me,
    and the second line:

    "so hold hands with my voice for now"

    -Very clever, and one of my favorite parts.

    "dont tell me it's not worth the effort again
    because no ending is good without a fight."

    -I loved these lines: they really expressed to me how much dedication and desire it takes to be in a relationship; how meaningful and important, though sometimes heartbreaking, the conversations we hold are. To stand up for one's heart, no matter the circumstances.

    Also,

    "it's not fair that every kiss now is compared
    to the strawberry taste of your wine cool lips"

    -Beautifully penned, and passionately felt: made me see and taste what you described.

    This is a very good piece. Oozing raw and sincere emotion. I really enjoyed reading it. I'll go ahead and state the obvious, saying: I would ask you to capitalize the necessary words, but in the larger scope that didn't throw me off too much or take any punch out of the poem -- so I suppose it doesn't matter. Hum.

    I look forward to reading more of your work.