You are truly a gifted poet. I have enjoyed each and everyone I have read. You have a way of bringing words to life. this stanza inparticular was very powerful:
I want to live life with a smile to its end.
But broken and bleeding, I'm forced to pretend.
I've always been cheerful it's been known from the start.
But in the end they will say, "cause of death?", "broken heart".
I hope to see your poems published one day.
10 years ago
That was so beautiful, and sad. So moving! I also enjoyed how you pulled the reader in by adressing him. Many relatable emotions, and even if someone can't relate, you explain it all so well I bet they could. The flow was great and I loved the rhyme. Wonderful poem! Amazing! 5/5