Comments : Two Sides to See

  • 11 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    You are truly a gifted poet. I have enjoyed each and everyone I have read. You have a way of bringing words to life. this stanza inparticular was very powerful:

    I want to live life with a smile to its end.
    But broken and bleeding, I'm forced to pretend.
    I've always been cheerful it's been known from the start.
    But in the end they will say, "cause of death?", "broken heart".

    I hope to see your poems published one day.
    Good luck

  • 10 years ago

    by mandy

    That was so beautiful, and sad. So moving! I also enjoyed how you pulled the reader in by adressing him. Many relatable emotions, and even if someone can't relate, you explain it all so well I bet they could. The flow was great and I loved the rhyme. Wonderful poem! Amazing! 5/5

    -mandy :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    This is truly a beautifully written poem. it was full of relative emotions and that's something that can really move the reader and capture their attention, well done 5/5