Wow. That was freaking amazing. Completely blew me away, that could be published and everyone would buy it. The emotion was just amazing; I felt every word you wrote. The rhyming just made it that much better, and each word flowed so nicely off the tip of my tongue. This is the best poem I have EVER read. Amazing job, my favorite line... every line! There is absolutely nothing wrong with your poem, it's just so beautiful. One million bazillion out of five!!! Really, holly crap dude; I'm breathless.
I have added this to my favorites . Most long poems fizzle out and become strained. The poet forcing it to continue but has really run out of things to say.
Your poem flowed with amazing ease, very emotionally complete and very easy to read
Finally here is a love poem with no cliches!
From poetry to paintings to lyrics........what more can one ask for when all has been said with words that rhymes, and loved declared so marvelously.Definitely a refreshing read.....beautiful!
That is the sweetest poem in the world! More romantic than anything I have ever read. Its so beautiful, im stunned. Whoever you wrote that for is one lucky girl. Girls would die to have a guy love them like that. The simple words are very strong and the compassion rings out from every verse. Brilliant write! Absoulutely amazing....