Comments : Piranha

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Damn it Jordan your writing is powerful!

  • 4 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Wow this is a very intense piece, i love it!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Mercy! This dark gem by Jordan oozes with powerful darkness and emotion.

    His word usage is very fun, favorable and vibrant. I cant begin to praise the beauty of his words.

    The message of an unhealthy relationship perhaps...

    The formatting is wonderful and the repetition of the door is powerful and significant to this piece I feel...

    wonderful poem by Jordan!!!