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by Lost One Apr 17, 2017
Love, romance /
Why do I love you? Honestly, I don't know. There's something deep inside of me that makes this feeling so.
Words can't describe this magic because it exists outside the mind, burried deep within my heart is the answer none will find.
How can a reason for this phenomenon exist? Like a lake before the sunrise the definition is shrouded in mist.
No one truly understands why we love so much- we die; if or when they say they do then surely its a lie.
Superficial reasons come up like beauty or their mind, but how well do you know them? Beneath their skin you're blind.
Go ahead make a list and do what lovestruck do, I'll tell you simply what you'll see- what everyone else does too.
Some share what is hidden and I've laid here bare my soul. And all who know me know well, seldom do I relinquish control.
So the only answer to the question posed, "why do I love you?" is what I've said from the beginning, "Woman, because I do."
oi oi fella.....I have to say that i love this write, straight from the heart with some wonderful rhymes and imagery.Awesome :)
by Lost One
by Allen Harriet
that answer is very funny
by Courtney Hough
This is a truly adorable heartfelt write! I'm so happy i stumbled onto it Tony:) What a special bond love is.
Yes, it is. It means a lot to me that this is still touching people a year after I posted it. Thanks Courtney : )
beautiful.... love the rhyme and how you describe love.
very well done :) This one is getting my nomination for this week! :D
Thank you Olwin, I've always written better when I write from the heart. And she's held mine since the day we met.
by Milly Hayward
Tony this is superb. I love the rhyming the visuals and the emotions conveyed just beautiful. An amazing piece that is one of the best romantic pieces I've read in a ling time