by Brenda
Awesome write Ben! I was a bit creeped out, it was like the end of times out there. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Brenda. It's actually an older poem that I tweaked and reposted. |
by mossgirl19
I liked it Ben. I imagine waking up to that and feeling the weird atmosphere. I felt it. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Mel |
Glad to have you back Ben missed your writes. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you so much, Dagmar. It's good to be back and hopefully as a wiser and more discreet sort of chap... |
Superb. You have captured all that is odd and silent in a cold crisp morning when the world hasn't begun to wake. All my best wishes Milly x |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Milly and thank you for everything. |
by Ocean Chant
Ah I really like this, it made my mind create images that made me honestly smile. A deep breath kind of words. Thank you for sharing :) |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you - glad you enjoyed. |
by Liz
I thought I was seeing things when I saw your name. Lol |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Liz...it wasn't the longest break but one that's done me good. |
by Ya----Na
Ben, mate, good to hear from you. |
by Ben Pickard
Very grateful to you, good man. |
by Ren
LOVE IT! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Ren |
by Michael
Ben |
by Ben Pickard
Michael, thank you so much and for forgiving me enough to read after the negativity I brought to this special site. |
Beautiful work! Felt like I was on a nature walk on cool crisp morning, its a wonderful nature scene that you have painted with your words. Excellent write! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much, Lemon S. |
by yogi73
such vivid imagery. I love a crisp morning walk. It reminds me of robert frost |
by Ben Pickard
I didn't write this with Frost in mind, but I do love his work, so maybe on a subconscious level, I channelled the great man! Thank you. |
Ben, I love this as much now as before. The image you conjure is so clear in my mind and I just love the title too! :-) x |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Kitty. |
by Ben
Me ol' mucker you write like a beast :) |
by Ben Pickard
lol, Ben. Thank you! |
by Em
Hi Ben I'm glad you revisited this piece and posted it again... I'm going to try and analyse it as best I can because I'm going stir crazy trying to distract myself from having my grandads funeral on Wednesday anyhow.. |
by Ben Pickard
I was very sorry to hear about your grandad, Em, and things like that put all this writing nonsense into perspective, so thank you for taking the time and I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
Very beautiful make you feel like your really there you have a vivid imagination which make you a great writer never lose it |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks for reading. |
Hi Ben, |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Ingrid, and thank you for your never wavering support! |
by Scott Cole
Congratulations on ur win!!!!! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Scott |
by naaz
Congratulations Ben! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, naaz |
Congratulations on a well deserved win. Best wishes Milly x |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Milly |
Congratulations, Prodigal Son :-) |