Comments : Dandelion Confessions

  • 1 year ago

    by Lost One

    Beautiful form Ben.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Fantastic metaphors and the mental image of the dandelion fluff taking the confessed indiscretions away on the breeze. Love it Ben :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Another astounding piece Ben which left me breathless

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, this is magnificent. I'm blown away...

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is one of my favorites, Ben! I feel strength and peace in the beauty of this piece.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    Ben Lilies and dahlias gonna love you for the way you write.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Wonderful imagery here, Ben.
    Not only with your words, but with the format. The way you trail off in single words, depicting that wind, that breath and with it all those stolen indescretions floating away.

    Excellent.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Michael. I always thought this was my favourite free verse piece I have written

  • 5 months ago

    by Imperfection

    Cool poem very differently written to others I’ve read

    • 5 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks. I don't write a lot of free verse, but I'm most proud of this one, I think.