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Beautiful form Ben.
by Ben Pickard
by Kitty Cat Lady
Fantastic metaphors and the mental image of the dandelion fluff taking the confessed indiscretions away on the breeze. Love it Ben :-) x
by Em (marmite)
Another astounding piece Ben which left me breathless
Ben, this is magnificent. I'm blown away...
Brenda, Em, Kitty - many thanks
This is one of my favorites, Ben! I feel strength and peace in the beauty of this piece.
Thanks so much, Mel
Ben Lilies and dahlias gonna love you for the way you write.
Thanks so much, Shane.
by - Mr. Darcy
Wonderful imagery here, Ben.
Not only with your words, but with the format. The way you trail off in single words, depicting that wind, that breath and with it all those stolen indescretions floating away.
Thank you, Michael. I always thought this was my favourite free verse piece I have written
Cool poem very differently written to others I’ve read
Thanks. I don't write a lot of free verse, but I'm most proud of this one, I think.