Comments : Eternity to Writers

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi, Nee

    super extended metaphor. I like the meter and rhyme, especially in stanzas: 1,2 and 5.

    Take care.

  • 3 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Nee ... swoony! This is lovely and begs to be part of someone's 'story' from afar ... beautiful! :-)
    =^.^=

  • 3 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    You have expressed a Very unique thought, nee. Good to see you back.

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nee, this is just lovely-so sweet-

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Nee - tightly rhymed and well written

    All the best

  • 3 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Love this Nee