by Mark
Haunting story I can't get out of my mind. The phrasing and the rhyming contributes to this unique feeling. I picture it well. Great write as always! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much, Mark |
lovely |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks Allen |
Wow Ben! Epic! Spooky, ghostly, haunting and gave me goosebumps! You really took us with you on this beautifully woven story and ended it with an 'ooh' moment! Love it and nominated :-) x |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Kitty |
by Em (marmite)
This has always sent goosebumps all over me and reduced me to tears.. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Em |
by Lost One
As I was reading this, I thought it could have gone one of two ways, either she was dead or the narrator was. Either way, it was gripping from start to finish. Very Lovecraftian. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks for reading, Tony - glad you enjoyed. |
by CJ Maleney
This is absolutely epic Ben |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks for reading, Craig. Take care |
by Ya----Na
You are incredibly talented Ben |
by Ben Pickard
Nice of you to say, Shane - thank you. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Ben, this is the best of the best poems you have ever penned I believe! The mix of melancholy, sadness and mystery are expertly woven together holding the reader in a trance, then an ending worthy of a best selling Novel! A winner in my book for sure! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much for reading, Ken |
by Dreamofolwin
FANTASTIC Poem Ben... Had me totally mesmerised lol. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much, Olwin. Love your new profile picture, by the way. |
by - Mr. Darcy
At last Anna is at rest - away from her shackled grave. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Michael |
by Brenda
Ben, I have loved this poem from the first time I read this. It truly is an awesome write. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much, Brenda. Funny thing is, I wasn't going to re-post this, but I did some editing and ended up liking it again! |
by Anne Moore
The name scared me... its very similar to my name... it caught me off guard... |
by Ben Pickard
Sorry about that, Anne! |