Comments : Ironic That You Made Me Laugh

  • 1 year ago

    by Blank

    Interesting but great poem.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Jeez Ben, haven't you let up some of your fabulous talent yet? I thought me being away would make you miss me so much you'd go into hiding and forget all about poetry once and for all LOL!! Joking aside this is excellent as ever... :)
    Take care x

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Genius, Ben... Genius!
    This is going into my favourites. Nominated next week for sure.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Blooming marvellous, and your intelligence in this is great

    M :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    You slay me Ben! Another amazing piece!

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    This has got my mind bending ways and picturing
    images which your words bring to live. An interesting poem
    indeed and I like the choice of your title...take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Fabbity fab Ben! I must have missed this one.
    Your imagery is second to none and you've clearly time-travelled here from another era! Brilliant :-) x

    *'past' should be 'passed'?*

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you Kitty. As for 'past' - I make that mistake time and again...

  • 1 year ago


    Nice work Ben, a crafty way of using the King's English! Calling one a " Cuckold" may avoid a punch in the nose due to a lack of knowledge but, with today's common knowledge, using cuss words can be dangerous, un-glamorous! Love the humor, and intercourse between the characters. Funny lines, mixed with many unforced rhymes. Excellent write, added to favorites, you the man, not the knave.