Comments : Ironic That You Made Me Laugh

  • 2 years ago

    by Blank

    Interesting but great poem.

  • 2 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Jeez Ben, haven't you let up some of your fabulous talent yet? I thought me being away would make you miss me so much you'd go into hiding and forget all about poetry once and for all LOL!! Joking aside this is excellent as ever... :)
    Take care x

  • 2 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Genius, Ben... Genius!
    This is going into my favourites. Nominated next week for sure.

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Ben,
    Blooming marvellous, and your intelligence in this is great

    M :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    You slay me Ben! Another amazing piece!

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This has got my mind bending ways and picturing
    images which your words bring to live. An interesting poem
    indeed and I like the choice of your title...take care

  • 2 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Fabbity fab Ben! I must have missed this one.
    Your imagery is second to none and you've clearly time-travelled here from another era! Brilliant :-) x
    =^.^=

    *'past' should be 'passed'?*

    • 2 years ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you Kitty. As for 'past' - I make that mistake time and again...

  • 2 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Nice work Ben, a crafty way of using the King's English! Calling one a " Cuckold" may avoid a punch in the nose due to a lack of knowledge but, with today's common knowledge, using cuss words can be dangerous, un-glamorous! Love the humor, and intercourse between the characters. Funny lines, mixed with many unforced rhymes. Excellent write, added to favorites, you the man, not the knave.