by Blank
Interesting but great poem. |
by Em (marmite)
Jeez Ben, haven't you let up some of your fabulous talent yet? I thought me being away would make you miss me so much you'd go into hiding and forget all about poetry once and for all LOL!! Joking aside this is excellent as ever... :) |
by Mr. Darcy
Genius, Ben... Genius! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, all. |
by Michael
Ben, |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Michael |
by Brenda
You slay me Ben! Another amazing piece! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Brenda |
by Meena Krish
This has got my mind bending ways and picturing |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Meena |
Fabbity fab Ben! I must have missed this one. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you Kitty. As for 'past' - I make that mistake time and again... |
by CRAFTY KEN
Nice work Ben, a crafty way of using the King's English! Calling one a " Cuckold" may avoid a punch in the nose due to a lack of knowledge but, with today's common knowledge, using cuss words can be dangerous, un-glamorous! Love the humor, and intercourse between the characters. Funny lines, mixed with many unforced rhymes. Excellent write, added to favorites, you the man, not the knave. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Ken |