Interesting but great poem.

Jeez Ben, haven't you let up some of your fabulous talent yet? I thought me being away would make you miss me so much you'd go into hiding and forget all about poetry once and for all LOL!! Joking aside this is excellent as ever... :)
Take care x

Genius, Ben... Genius!
This is going into my favourites. Nominated next week for sure.

Ben,
Blooming marvellous, and your intelligence in this is great

M :)

You slay me Ben! Another amazing piece!

This has got my mind bending ways and picturing
images which your words bring to live. An interesting poem
indeed and I like the choice of your title...take care

Fabbity fab Ben! I must have missed this one.
Your imagery is second to none and you've clearly time-travelled here from another era! Brilliant :-) x
=^.^=

*'past' should be 'passed'?*

Nice work Ben, a crafty way of using the King's English! Calling one a " Cuckold" may avoid a punch in the nose due to a lack of knowledge but, with today's common knowledge, using cuss words can be dangerous, un-glamorous! Love the humor, and intercourse between the characters. Funny lines, mixed with many unforced rhymes. Excellent write, added to favorites, you the man, not the knave.