Comments : Grief (acrostic)

  • 10 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Hugs <3

  • 10 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Oh yes, I'm liking this. X

  • 10 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Em, Well penned
    Any one can easily relate
    I am one of its victims.

  • 8 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    I'm highlighting this poem for many reasons-
    its just that powerful and beautiful.

    Firstly, In my opinion acrostics need to flow
    and capture the word in every line; word being "Grief"

    that word is one of the most heaviest of words and it holds so much emotion- Em has captured the meaning perfectly, and beautifully in this pieces.

    To watch the one you love go and to have all the memories flash in front of you-- My goodness I just cant express the power of this poem.

    Just perfect!!

    • 8 months ago

      by Em (marmite)

      I appreciate you words and vote andrea. Mwah x