refrigerator magnets

by Thomas   Aug 29, 2018

It was only on the day we were packing my belongings into
four cardboard boxes that I began to think about the magnets
affixed to the white exterior surface of our shared, and-yet-
not-quite-shared-anymore, refrigerator and whether they
were simply souvenirs you had purchased from your many
journeys to distant places or if they meant something more-

to you, that is, if they were gifts from family or all-too-carefully
chosen photographs of natural landmarks, of landmark moments
from a life you had already lived, from a time before the years
that your friends would come to label "b.h." - before him - and
after which I would be relegated to existing only as a footnote
in the pages of your life story or as the punchline of many jokes.

Whether they meant anything to you, I never asked, but for me
that day they were symbolic of our separation, our lives once
thought inextricably entwined, the ties unfurling like wedding
ribbon, untying like knots in frayed rope, unglued, unbonded.
I do not think you will mind, but I confess I stole one of the
magnets, on its face the Grand Canyon. Cliche, sure, but so were we.


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  • 7 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Nameless grabbed my attention this week with a crafty, metaphor "Magnets"

    I really admired how he designed and weaved his emotions of a broken relationship within the kitchen magnets- just wonderful!

  • 9 months ago

    by Mark

    Great win!

  • 9 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy


  • 9 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Personal yet thought-provoking indeed. I, too, am happy to see this nominated. There's a lot of elements to this. Reminiscing and also wondering perhaps about the life this person will have after you. Are our own lives simpy collections of all the best memories or journeys? I sensed a bit of bitterness at the closing line but it made me smile a bit that you took that magnet, maybe for your own reason, and it kind of left me with a feeling that you're unapologetic for taking it.

    Welcome to the site, and can't wait to read more of your work! Feel free to join in on the main forum, read others' work, etc. If you have any questions, let us know. Welcome to PnQ :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Hey and welcome to the site
    This is a wonderful first piece which is very thought provoking glad to see it's nominated

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