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by Maple Tree
HUG ME <3
Damn it man this is brilliant, beautiful and outstanding-
Ben, you are my magical man, I love this and you!!
this made my day and I giggled!
by Ben Pickard
You're welcome, Andrea. I have to say, this did make me smile as I wrote it, which isn't always easy...
by Em (marmite)
Fan bloody tastic!!!
Glad you enjoyed, Em
OMG! Wow....didn't know things were so serious between you two...what the hell Ben? I thought you and me....well, us two....hmph! Spare me your English charm.....;)
In all seriousness. This is wonderful! Knocked it out of the park!
Brenda, it takes more than one woman to form a harem. Of course, there is room for you too :)
A very romantic tale of a fellow poet Ben! albeit in jest ;)
Jest? Who said anything about jest? :)
by - Mr. Darcy
I see it now, I should have known
your heart has only gone and roamed
across the sea, away from me
to a woman, a Maple Tree
I thought our love meant more than this
to publicly renounce our gift
our gift of love between two guys
a gift, this tree cannot supply
Do not forget the nights of heat
the nights you moaned at my teat
are not my breasts as wonderful
their shape size and pert muscle
No, don't answer, I know it now
she, the tree, has made you growl
but you, my son, were my dog first
I have your leash, so do your worst...
Now this is the kind of humour I miss when you are away, Michael. I would praise this comment, but I'm not sure whether the mods would pass it...
by just ashley
I really like the flow of this poem. You really painted a beautiful picture with this one
Thanks for reading.
by CRAFTY KEN
Hey Ben, a harem is nice, my wife could use the help!
Sorry to burst your balloon, but with the heart, only one woman can fill the room, ask Solomon.
Thanks, Ken. And you are right:there's only room for one.
This is beautiful and eloquently written. After reading the comments as well, you and Mr. Darcy need to write the next Shakespeare novel haha. Definitely made my day.
Maybe we will... :))
by Tanya Southey
Thank you, Tanya
Congrats Ben on this one too.