Spellbound, still, by the space between your breasts
and the music of your laughter which
chimes through the golden orchards of
summer's fruitful dalliance,
the notes of which will drench
the earth above my
tired bones with
Ben Pickard 2019
*Reverse Etheree - the syllable count begins with 10 and sequentially runs to 1.
I feel that the reverse etheree works slightly better than the regular one. In this case at least! The word choice here is surprisingly seamless in spite of the limitations of this form. Masterfully written. Your work around formed poetry knows little bounds
An etheree is a great way to showcase a poets talent. Personally, I like the way the form creates a triangular shape. Your words never fail to please me, and at times, like now, a single word can make me snigger!