Comments : A Skeletal Harvest

  • Dude I had to read this twice haha.
    The imagery I had was insane but literal speaking everything was seen as it was read.

    That over the aeons - through centuries passed -
    there are bones of all those that were lost;
    for they, too, were buried and left for the wolves
    in caves, that from life, they were tossed.

    This stranza was fantastic the word choice was outstanding and fitted beautifully ... the whole piece I read reminding me of nursery rhymes lol don't ask me why .. Deffo one of my favourites of yours and one of them I would of loved to created my self.

    Awesome !!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Glad you enjoyed it. By the way, you yourself need to get writing again, in my humble opinion.

      Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ben, I am blown away.
    Well done.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this Ben! Glad to see it nominated! Well done sir!

  • 1 year ago

    by DarkLight

    Lovely piece.

  • 1 year ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Nice work Ben, worthy of the Nomination!

  • 1 year ago

    by Star

    I am so happy this made to the front page!!
    Congratulations!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is a heart wrenching poem where the images pop out so
    vividly and makes the reader feel every word and feelings...a teary
    read...well penned.
    Congrats on the win..

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win Ben! Well deserved!