Comments : The Blood Orange, The Boulder And The Watermelon

  • 3 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Genius and inspired.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thanks, Michael. I thought I would abandon my beloved meter and just write!

  • 3 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I have to give it to you Ben. Not only this is interesting but very different from your other pieces. All the very best to you

    • 3 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks so much, Dagmar. Take care and all the best to you, too.

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Squishy piece Ben, lots going on here M :)

    • 3 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I suppose it is rather 'squishy'! Thanks Michael

  • 3 months ago

    by Daniel

    Ah, I must've missed this! I really enjoyed it, Ben. An original, yet sinister write that makes me feel it was inspired by a strange nightmare!

    • 3 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Nightmare? It was a dream, Daniel! :) Thank you.