Comments : Wrong Frequency

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Damn Ben you are good! Loved this!

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks for reading and for your confidence in me, Brenda!

  • 2 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Yet another masterpiece dude. The ending totally got me.

    Brilliant

    Craig

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Craig. Glad you enjoyed it.

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I like this Ben. I can see you stretching yourself here. It is only by moving from our comfort zone we become more than before. I'd love to know your inspiration for this style.

    All the best.

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Misery, Michael! No, in all seriousness, I just liked the idea of writing something that rhymed but wasn't too concerned with meter and syllable counts.

  • 2 months ago

    by Shruti

    Reading your poems after a while and they are as beautiful and refreshing as ever, no matter the category.
    This one is so sad, especially when I reached the end. And I love the title!

    Looking forward to more.
    S.

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations, Ben. I now know your secret to winning all these contests - you're bloody good!

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Not sure about that, but thank you, Michael