The Exam

by Bryce   Apr 28, 2019


Scene: Inside the exam hall

They sit there; competent
and you sit there; incompetent.

You look around,
They fiercely scratch pieces of paper with black ink
You look at yourself,
Your pen has no ink.

You told them.
You told them!
You didn't want to climb the tree.
They didn't listen.
They couldn't see,
You were a fish splashing water.

Your mind; it has become
------empty.
Your life, it has become
------futile.
you. you feel worthless.

you don't want to die.
Not Yet.

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  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Welcome to P&Q! I really liked this a lot. The layout is cool and the write is open and raw. Well done-

    • 3 months ago

      by Bryce

      thank you so much!

  • 3 months ago

    by the color green

    welcome to the site, bryce! for your first poem here, it was a good beginning, and i won't be disappointed by the next ones. i enjoyed how you used the formatting to strong effect without having to outright sprinkle exclamation marks like pepper. i don't really have a lot to say about the poem other than this, because really: i do mean it when i say it speaks for itself.

    • 3 months ago

      by Bryce

      Thank you so much. I hope not to disappoint you.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site, Bryce. I love this - it is creative and well formatted. Keep writing/posting.

    All the best

    • 3 months ago

      by Bryce

      Thank you so much for your support, Ben. I quite like the site.

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