Very cool Ben...I have never heard of this style.

...and I thought I was the only one making poetry forms up!
I like what you've created too, the balance of life that sadly fails.
Well done and take care.

I dont know what this form is, but it is so interesting I want to try it!!
“a sad place between light and nowhere.”
My favorite part is this, it sets my mind to dark places.
I love this!

Loved this as always you have a wonderful imagination that takes the reader into previously unimagined realms. Much love Milly x

Hey Ben, very Artistic, and, Masterful! As I read, these thoughts entered my head: I see the mysteries of God, the infinite gap between light, and, darkness, as written;
There lies a sad place between light and nowhere, great line. Roses by design, this requires a "Designer!". Though flames don't, and flowers don't, between them care, yes, the whole Creation declares the Glory of God, but, care arrived in Him becoming one of us! Great piece, added to my favorites!

Dude this was enchanting... the fact you used roses and candlelight made this so Spanish along with the form I have to admit I've seen them bit I believe I've never wrote one ... this just shows your artistic talent and imagination to think of things outside the box .. lovely piece

You are full of surprises and you imagination has no limits. I love it. All the very best Ben