by Brenda
Very cool Ben...I have never heard of this style. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Brenda. To be honest, neither had I but I was looking through Meena's work and saw she had written one so I thought I'd give it a go. I don't think it's great at all, but it's a start! |
by - Mr. Darcy
...and I thought I was the only one making poetry forms up! |
by Ben Pickard
No, Michael, two can play at that game! |
by Star
I dont know what this form is, but it is so interesting I want to try it!! |
by Ben Pickard
It was fun to try, but the uneven number syllable count isn't easy for a man who dreams in iambic pentameter! |
Loved this as always you have a wonderful imagination that takes the reader into previously unimagined realms. Much love Milly x |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Milly |
by CRAFTY KEN
Hey Ben, very Artistic, and, Masterful! As I read, these thoughts entered my head: I see the mysteries of God, the infinite gap between light, and, darkness, as written; |
by Ben Pickard
Interesting thoughts, Ken. Many thanks and all the best. |
Dude this was enchanting... the fact you used roses and candlelight made this so Spanish along with the form I have to admit I've seen them bit I believe I've never wrote one ... this just shows your artistic talent and imagination to think of things outside the box .. lovely piece |
by Ben Pickard
Lovely comment, Tony. Thank you. |
You are full of surprises and you imagination has no limits. I love it. All the very best Ben |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you so much, Dagmar, |