Comments : Ships From Sand (English sonnet)

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Ben,

    A lovely sonnet as usual :) So much hope and love you write here that all can be okay and how much effort will go to, to bring happiness to another. Simply lovely.
    M :) I would nominate but cant at the moment, sure someone will beat me to it though ;)

    • 5 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Lovely words, Michael. Thanks. Also, congratulations on the win this week.

  • 5 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi, Ben, your rhyming couplet really brings this sonnet together. Well crafted indeed. If Michael is too slow on the draw, I'll nominate.

    • 5 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Michael - same goes for you! Well done.

  • 5 months ago

    by Star

    There is hope as they said in this, to bring back love to live the love once again. But I feel sadness coming from a broken heart, which over powers the hope...
    I won’t say anything about the form, because that your field!!

    • 5 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, STAR - interesting thoughts.

  • 5 months ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Woh....been a long time since I read yours Ben... And this is so beautifully crafted that it is a delight to read :)

    Bravo.

    PS. especially love the last two lines..

    • 5 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Olwin? Lovely to hear from you. Thank you and I hope you are keeping well.

    • 5 months ago

      by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

      Yes its me Ben lol . Had to make a new account :/ Am keeping very well thank you. And am a sucker for sonnets so HAD to read this! HA