Comments : Ivory Immortality

  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Some songs forever haunt, don't they?
    Nice free formed writing.

    • 1 week ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Michael. And you're right, they do.

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I love the imagery that is so hauntingly woven around music. Milly x

  • 1 week ago

    by S.T.A.R.

    This itself is like a sad song. What I love about this, is I feel longing and continuity of you’re feelings, that will be lingering till:
    “that you shape my coffin so that I am
    forever interred in your tender notes”
    ^
    ...and maybe beyond that. Which is created by the lack of full stops.