Comments : Lines In The Ocean (English sonnet)

  • 2 weeks ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Wow, Ben. Although there are a small handful of sonneteers on here, none can balance the delicacy of the form; the nostalgic feel of words whilst harmonising the clarity of modern life.

    Well done, a love poem that needs to guilted frame.

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    As always lost for words - a real pleasure to read your poetry - breathtaking piece with superb visuals. Milly x

  • 1 week ago

    by Mark

    Great win!

  • 1 week ago

    by Daniel

    An excellent win, Ben. You enviably pen perfect sonnets with ease, with such consistency.

    • 1 week ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Many thanks, Daniel, but believe me, it's not always easy.

      All the best

  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Ben, I think you'll find 11 syllables in the 7th line....

    Not really! Lol

    Your work is fabulous, as per usual.