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by BOB GALLO
"I let you pace through my mind
with your dirty feet"
It is so innovative (for the lack of a better word) poetically adventurous.
Haha, in my case, however, the depression is the cause of the dirty feet.
All the best
by Milly Hayward
I like very much those opening lines - the idea of dirty feet pacing through one's mind is a horrible thought and could well cause an onset of depression. A vivid and unique portrayal. Milly x