Comments : dirty feet causes depression

  • 1 month ago

    by BOB GALLO

    "I let you pace through my mind
    with your dirty feet"
    It is so innovative (for the lack of a better word) poetically adventurous.
    Haha, in my case, however, the depression is the cause of the dirty feet.

    All the best

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I like very much those opening lines - the idea of dirty feet pacing through one's mind is a horrible thought and could well cause an onset of depression. A vivid and unique portrayal. Milly x