Fourteen (syllables)

by Jamie   Jul 11, 2019


Ginger tresses flow freely 

d
o
w
n

my amethyst tunic.

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  • 4 days ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I love the layout and the visuals of bold contrasting colours.

  • 5 days ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Ginger hair is a colour that is often the source of humour on TV but is actually quite beautiful. It never occurred to me that amethyst (one of my favourite gem colours) and ginger go well together but they really do.. The positioning of the word "down" going down adds interest to a minimalist piece but I wonder if it wasn't specifically an acrostic whether it could be explored and expanded in more detail as there is a lot that can be written about flowing tresses and the way that they move etc. That might be one for the future? Glad to see you back. Milly x