by Ben Pickard Jul 17, 2019
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
No mourning site to rest my head, |
Oh Ben, you broke my heart with this one. Why did everybody nominate the great poems before me. The title is something, it's different and held couple triple analyses. It's lovely when you can't catch where the poem is going from the title. I found this one interesting. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you for another great comment, Rania |
Breathtaking as usual. I know it sounds a bit cliche but when I read your poetry I always get that "Wow! this is sheer poetry" feeling. Those last two stanzas floored me. . Milly x |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Milly, as always |
by Em (marmite)
Wow, this is extremely heavy and I balled my eyes out. I'm not sure why but every time, it's like you reach out to me in verse, it's weird.. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks again, Em |