by Ben Pickard Jul 21, 2019
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
...I am amputated from reality, |
by Milo
You had my attention from start to finish. Your poems always have a way of catching my full attention. Congrats! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much, Milo |
by Darren
wow |
by Ben Pickard
Just as I was beginning to think of rewriting it in iambic pentameter... |
by Everlasting
I saw it coming. I saw it coming and I just couldn’t run away from it. Really, your poem was the bomb. It hit me. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much again, Luce. |
A Haunting, macabre tapestry that captures vividly the horrors of war. Not a huge fan of non rhyming or war poetry I find your imagery and emotion pulling content to be spot on and worryingly compelling because the visuals are scarily accurate. A great write. Milly x |
by Ben Pickard
I wasn't a huge fan of war poetry until I read Wilfred Owen's "Anthem for doomed youth" and "Dulce et decorum est". They are masterpieces and the imagery in the latter is haunting and so vivid. |
by Maple Tree
you make my Jaw drop! |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Maple. Hope you're well. |