Comments : Daffodils In Broken Skin

  • 2 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Blimey Ben! This is so vivid and raw and bitter and asks a million existential questions. Hats off to you sir! Happily nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks so much Kitty and thank you for the nomination

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Another fine poem oozing with imagery and emotion. Very dynamic I could imagine this being read out on stage with those amazing acoustics echoing the vigour of this piece. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Why do you always, always do this... It's like you read my mind and exactly what I'm thinking though you write it better.. Much better
    Take care and congrats on front page x

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I guess, truthfully, many of us feel a little like this sometimes, Em. Although my poems often tend towards the miserable, it's for that reason maybe that people can relate. Not sure.

      Take care and thank you

  • 1 month ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Absolutely amazing. I had to read it again and again.