Comments : Hidden Side

  • 1 week ago

    by Mark

    Love the dark rhyming, how each line connects to the next.. ...Sightless inside my darkness dreary...beautifully dark

  • 1 week ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is dark but there really is some clever rhyming throughout this, Tony.
    I hope you are keeping well and your insides aren't 'squirming' overly.

    Take care