Comments : If Heaven Bursts

  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Good afternoon *tips hat*

    It has been a while, but there is one thing that is sure to make me want to come back - reading excellent poetry such as this. I know its dark, but it does make one think. Is there a heaven for the amount of evil in this world? I wonder if there's enough room in hell?

    As always lovely writing that makes me sing. All the best (hugs)

  • 1 week ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi Ben. It's wonderful to read your writing again! I have never really thought of heaven bursting...but it's like someday somehow it would. And aren't we...still living...have questions of what really happens when we die. Quite a deep one.

  • 1 week ago

    by Guilty By Design

    I love this piece! Specifically the ending, great work.

    ”and when we die and hear the call
    there is no hope for us at all.“

  • 2 days ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Quite haunting --- beautifully written.