A refreshingly different approach that really works. The repeated refrains within lengthened lines whilst still retaining the rhymed stanzas was very clever and pulled together some very vivid imagery. Loved it. Milly x
It is a pleasure to read your poetry this evening. I love your style, the elegance of the words and how you fit them, this poem has a rhythm when you read it and the message has depth and feeling. Truly love this piece!!