Comments : The Clearing (Haiku Chain)

  • 1 month ago

    by Rania Moallem

    This chain of poems feels like meditating. The images are so vivid, the imagery is spot on. It's splendid. How you described the whole scene, how the leaves fell upon the ground covering the prints of a path two have taken, it feels forlorn and yet peaceful at the same time. It's so inspiring and touching. The last stanza stood out differently, while the initial verses felt more like narrative, the last one felt like a real closing phrase to the above. Where the clearing lies! It's just stunning to wrap it all this way. An amazing poem honestly.

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard


  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    I love this! Creating a chain gives this such a peaceful flow. Congratulations on your front page win! Well deserved-