Comments : Lofty Lakes Are Black Lagoons (English sonnet)

  • 3 days ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is a beautiful Sonnet interwoven with a story of olden days perhaps...nonetheless, I liked the read :)

    • 3 days ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, again.
      All the best as ever

  • 2 days ago

    by Daniel

    'As lofty lakes are seldom swam in warm.' ooh what a mouthful! It's almost a tongue twister!

    There's a deep nostalgia and longing throughout this Ben. Wonderful sonnet weaving as ever.

  • 10 hours ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Hey Ben, I see you've not lost your touch in writing mind-boggling fantastic sonnets! Sometimes when I read your sonnets about love, I wonder if it's that you experience love on a different, more intense level than the rest of us mere non-sonnet writing mortals; or whether you're just far better at expressing it with your vivid metaphors.
    You know I'm a traditionalist and to me, you epitomize 'poetry' in its purest form. Really (really) excellent stuff! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 hours ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Good to hear from you again, Kitty. Many thanks for stopping by.