Comments : Lonely Path

  • 2 months ago

    by Kate

    Just as nice as it was when I first read it. Again, still very happy with the repeating lines in the beginning and with the last stanza. It really brings it full circle and kind of mimics the relationship between you and that person, starting out happy and bright but then it takes a turn for the worst and you kind of sulk back into the place you were before. I also like the hint of rhyming in the beginning the piece. Great job!

    • 2 months ago

      by Milton

      Thank you so much Kate! It means a lot to hear that you enjoyed how I put everything together! I'm glad you liked it!