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by Lost star Aug 14, 2020
Love, romance /
How hollow do I have to be
How deep do I have to bury myself?
So that your dark light extrapolates
from my soul and leaves me free to
view a world with falling cherry blossoms
and soaring goshawks……
It’s said all rivers run to the sea;
(as once I ran to you)
yet you had me swimming upstream
into malevolent forests and ragged mountains
veiled in marshmallows and
the scent of cut grass
When the tide of realisation turned
you were left on the shore,
and I no longer frozen
felt the true touch of another
And I find myself wondering….
How yours ever felt warm to begin with.
by Gracy Judith
Beautifully penned! Congratulations on the win.
by Lost star
Thank you Gracy!
by Ben Pickard
This is a truly exceptional piece of writing.
Thank you Ben :)
Congratulations on your win !!!
For some unknown, your writing style sounds familiar. Do we know each other? I like the poem.
by Milly Hayward
The title sets up imediately the tone of this poem which depicts the emotional torrants that still beset the character on bumping into a lost love. Millyx
Thank you i'm really glad you like it :)
by Maple Tree
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